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Touched,
Tempted,
Taken.
Stolen from the sanctity
Of walls once strong,
My heart's will,
Changing on a whim,
Fluttering in the wind,
Drifting over a pool of uncertainty.
Down,
Cast down.
Fallen to the surface,
Soft enough to cushion,
Deep enough to drown.
Suffocating in...
What?
Love, joy, memories of times long past?
Reminiscing on what once was,
Falling into utter chaos,
A whirlpool of sorrow,
A hurricane of dissent.
...
Yet there's light.
One so powerful,
So pure,
So beautiful,
Guiding me silently
Through the maelstrom.
It speaks not,
yet explains all.
It hears my grief,
Though sound is void
Perhaps...
Perhaps I've found it.
At long last
I
Have
Found
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-Max Azarcon 2010
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:iconfredrett:
I do believe this is my favorite poem of yours. They're all fantastic, but I especially enjoyed this one. :D
This is Katelynn, by the way.
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~PierceTalon Apr 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, Katelynn! ^_^ You me and Andrew should hang out again. That'd be amazing.
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Mood: Amazed ~ginger669 May 18, 2010   Photographer
Hey Pierce Talon. I just read your poem. Rember we met on omgle. I thought your poems would be all gothy but theyre acttually kool.
lost is my favoite its awesome.
and by the way my names roxy.
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:iconfredrett:
You're welcome. :) I agree, that would in fact be quite epindary. We must do it.
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:iconnotanamericanaverage:
OuO what did you find though? xD ima poke you at school until i know hehe :3
<3Ceirra xDD
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~PierceTalon Jan 31, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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